Amazing writing, I was taken the whole way through the psychology of the child and the serenity of the words clashes beautifully with the pace of the surrounding action ! loved it, thank you
Wow! Thank you so much for the comment. That’s exactly the atmosphere I aim to create, just casually, pleasantly deceiving the reader, haha. Glad it resonated with you! It really motivates me to keep working and getting better ☺️!
This struck the right balance of internal dialogue and action. You feel like you're moving at the same pace as the characters and not wanting them to hurry up.
Amazing writing, I was taken the whole way through the psychology of the child and the serenity of the words clashes beautifully with the pace of the surrounding action ! loved it, thank you
Thank you so so so much Imane. It means a lot 😭
SO good — so alive and honest. (And childlike without being saccharine or condescending, to either the characters or the reader.)
Thank you so much Faith, I’m happy you thought I didn’t overdo it. It truly means a lot coming from you!!!🥹
Yeah, your writing engages the senses in a very calm and pleasantly deceptive way. Thank you
Wow! Thank you so much for the comment. That’s exactly the atmosphere I aim to create, just casually, pleasantly deceiving the reader, haha. Glad it resonated with you! It really motivates me to keep working and getting better ☺️!
Great work! You've got a talent for character and dialogue.
Thank you Ben, this truly made my day.
Great story, compelling dialogue!
That’s such a nice compliment. I am very happy you liked it, thank you!
Lovely story, Hassania. Makes me want to hear/read what happens next.
Thank you Anthony! I don’t have a continuation to the story (yet?). I appreciate your comment!
That’s the beauty of a well told story: the reader is satisfied but still wants more.
This struck the right balance of internal dialogue and action. You feel like you're moving at the same pace as the characters and not wanting them to hurry up.
Wow! Thank you, I’m happy it was a good read. This means a lot.
It was a good read! Looking forward to more of your writing.
Really good, captures the chaos of a child's interior
Thank you, Matt! I am so flattered, as I highly admire what I've read of your work
Thanks, you left me a really nice comment so I wanted to do the same